Thursday, June 16, 2016

Animals at the zoo

I hope you like my report writing!

2 comments:

  1. Hi! Jake I liked your writing a lot because I learn't things that I didn't know before like meerkats stand on their hind legs. It was quite hard for me to find facts about my animals for my report. I can't see anything you need to improve on, great job.

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  2. Hi! Jake I liked your writing a lot because I learn't things that I didn't know before like meerkats stand on their hind legs. It was quite hard for me to find facts about my animals for my report. I can't see anything you need to improve on, great job.

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